Finalised Story Line

After a fun filled lesson discussing treatments, we came up with 3 ideas:

1) The final separation of two close friends due to University ends in tragedy as a car crash determines their future relationship.
2) 1960's themed bike ride that flashes back the main character's treacherous childhood she tries so desperately to forget.
3)Things take a turn for the worst when a girl is given shocking news about her dad on the day of her 18th birthday

We pitched our synopses to the class, with great feedback and advice on how to improve our ideas, as a group we came to the decision to alter treatment 2. We have decided to completely cut out the characters treacherous childhood, and make it a fun, quirky, exciting opening. The girl will be riding a vintage bike through a country lane with a repetitive cheesy grin on her face. We came up with the idea of different weather change in each shot, to show the continuity of the journey the girl carries out every morning. The destination of the girl will be unknown in the opening, so that means the Mise-en-scene won't change (apart from the weather of course).